Is this a liquor to sip or?A scent to adore?
Mi amor...?
Is it a remembrance of lusty times
Or a scent of rosemary thymes?
Mon ami?
Or is it love scented fragments
Of golden hued moments
Of golden hued moments
Glistening con tigo ?
Long ago?
Wasn't it just yesterday?
That last stanza has me sighing!!!!
ReplyDeleteSo clever!
I'm the first one here!! (unless you're holding onto to other comments...and if that's the case, grrr)
ReplyDeleteI wish I could write poetry like you do, but I'm stuck plodding along with story lines that contain no mystery of romance.
well. depends on what kind of moment did u spend with it :D
ReplyDeletegood magpie!
Oh the sweet smell of memories, can seem like yesterday...Kathe this is beautiful! :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely romantic Magpie. Ciao!
ReplyDelete"Glistening con tigo.." Oh my. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
ReplyDeleteIt always feels like only yesterday . . .
ReplyDelete"golden hued moments" Isn't it a blessing that they nver go! Lovely.
ReplyDeletedelightful!
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely! It really captures that sense of memory being attached to scent.
ReplyDelete... yesterday when I was young, the taste of life was sweet as rain upon my tongue .... Your Magpie reminds us all!
ReplyDelete"Glistening con tigo! I don't know what it means but I love it!
ReplyDeleteSo romantic..one could dance to it!! Lovely...
ReplyDeletelove it..it is all of these and more....very nice..bkm
ReplyDeletethis is gorgeous
ReplyDeleteI wish I could hear it
and smell it :)
Rene
A sweet and wonderfully 'scentual' read!
ReplyDeleteThe last stanza made me giggle. great magpie and take on the picture. :) River
ReplyDeleteScents and the memoires they evoke ...beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteI love it. And it is always just yesterday!
ReplyDeleteI just followed you and for some reason darned Google didn't have my usual image, so I'm there as a silhouette. I may delete and try again.
Wonderfully written work! Linking the cologne to memories of love. =)
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I vote for just yesterday.
ReplyDeleteLove the romantic nature of this, the longing questions, the memories.
BEAUTIFUL!
(And thank you for the comment on my magpie, so appreciated.)
This has a light, whimsical feel that I really like.
ReplyDeleteThis is very, very well-done.
ReplyDeletedivine!
ReplyDeletejust one sniff and its easy to remember...nice write...great magpie!
ReplyDeleteLove the air of romance... with a little tit for tat. pulled me right in. Great mag!
ReplyDeletea familiar scent can flood someone with such memories :) Great poem :)
ReplyDeleteLove your approach to this!
ReplyDeleteDear Kathew: Very sensitive portrait of the sensual kind; This line is so romantic!
ReplyDelete"love scented fragments Of golden hued moments". Thank-you!
Aromatically beautiful. Nice magpie.
ReplyDeleteLove the way it flows. Nice Magpie!
ReplyDeleteOnce again, wonderful mag Kathew... Loved the way you structured it and wondered what it really was... I can go with any of them or all of them.. Terific Mag..
ReplyDeleteI love the languages...and the options! Nice.
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