this was inspired by Willow's blog Magpie Talesgo visit for more creative poes, stories etc!
Ouch-it's hot!
Love so fiercely on fire hot
my soul steams
my soul steams
Plus an addendum to above posting
as some people said this should have been
about the extinguisher NOT the fire...chuckle-
so being an obedient good sport-here it is:
Don't blow on it!
The fire's outta control!
Extinguish it!
The firemen had to bash in the front door to get to the fire!
Steamy!! (my whole body is steamy this week)
ReplyDeleteLove your snappy repartee! This piece is the love we all want to have! Great work! :-)
ReplyDeleteWow...I can feel the burn....bkm
ReplyDelete... and your Magpie is hot too!
ReplyDeleteWow, too hot to touch.
ReplyDeleteYou were supposed to write about the extinguisher, not the fire!!!! Evacuate the neighborhood!
ReplyDeleteLovely magpie, short, sweet and soulful.
ReplyDeleteLovely piece, short and sweet and soulful.
ReplyDeleteLove can be hot stuff! I like this.
ReplyDeleteYou're right it's all soooooo hot!
ReplyDeleteToo hot!
ReplyDeleteI'd be happy with either! seeing that you produced both, I am even happier!
ReplyDeleteI absolutely screamingly love, "so fiercely on fire hot my soul steams" know what you mean! LOL
ReplyDeleteExtinguish the fiercely on fire hot love? Or is that a different outta control fire? Heheh.
ReplyDeleteHa ha Loved the comment about not the fire but the extinguisher!!
ReplyDeleteChristine
OK, I guess it's up to me to DO this:
ReplyDeleteDon't blow on it!
The fire's outta control!
Extinguish it!
OMG! You are "serious", Peep...
Wonderful!
Smiles!
Tasty!
ReplyDeleteThanks everbody for your great remarks! Isn't Magpie Tales the best?? Happy weekend!
ReplyDeleteSteamy, short and to the point! In short: a very snappy repartee!
ReplyDeleteDear KathW: This is INTENSE...HOT! Love it! Excellent! Ahhhh....
ReplyDeleteI don't think one extinguisher will be enough for this hot piece! :)
ReplyDeleteHot and steamy...a condition I am very familiar with living in Alabama. But, I'm always ready for a hot steamy love.
ReplyDeletewow. smoking magpie...and that they had to bash the door in. ha.
ReplyDeleteGreat Magpie/s.
ReplyDeleteOh! Love is hot!
ReplyDeletedifficult to extinguish the fire of lust. ;)
ReplyDeleteOh well, why try?
rel
It is a pretty hot topic, for sure. Great job.
ReplyDeleteQMM