Starry Night by Alex Ruiz
Perfection
Once seen
Never forgotten
Once seen
Has to be painted
Once seen
Has to be painted
.......
Enraged losing friends
Losing friends who loved
Who loved him despite
Despite his madness
Madness driving him
Driving him to slashing
Slashing lines and colors
Colors from that night
That starry starry night
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Thanks to Tess Kincaid for Magpie Tales
Have a great week!
Losing friends who loved
Who loved him despite
Despite his madness
Madness driving him
Driving him to slashing
Slashing lines and colors
Colors from that night
That starry starry night
~~~~~~
Thanks to Tess Kincaid for Magpie Tales
Have a great week!
Your words do powerfully convey the intense feeling of the photograph.
ReplyDeleteAwesome write, Kathe. I love the rhythm of it. I appreciate your comment at my blog. xo
ReplyDeleteYeah, I like these words to one of the great artistic geniuses !!
ReplyDeleteThis poem sings the tone of a mad fairytale. I like it. And I love the structure and repetitions.
ReplyDeleteYou got it. Must be painted, but where to start???
ReplyDeletevery sharp lines.....piercing...... brilliant :)
ReplyDeleteSomeday i hope to see a night sky like that. Your words convey the feeling i hope it gives me.
ReplyDeleteThe repetitions make it appear like a new form! Nicely Kathe!
ReplyDeleteHank
You did very, very well. What a photograph too. Majestic.
ReplyDeleteHave a fabulous day honey. Big hugs. :)
I'd say this is just about perfect as a response to the prompt. Great form, too.
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Nicely done....thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteHe us a moon calf , this one ...yeah give him life !
ReplyDeleteSlashing indeed.
ReplyDeleteNice Mag.
Love and Light, S
Great use of repetition in this....it adds to the impact.
ReplyDeleteThat maddening driving perfection...
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