I did have just a wee bit o' fun with this one!
She lustily sighed "Oh, please just one more"
Enviously eying the one she adored
Oozing with avarice and enormous greed
Her hand lazily reached over with a hungry need
Only to be met with a fierce hot anger
Refusing to admit her crumby fatal flaw
Of caloric intake beyond all awe
No wonder she cannot fit into her tiny size six
Those VooDoo Doughnuts got her into this fix.http://voodoodoughnut.com/
"It's all their fault!"
haha - so cute!...I was beginning to wonder why there wasn't a blogger warning stating that your site contains explicit content until I got to the end. hee hee - fun poem!ReplyDelete
love those voodoo donuts kathew. They're bad and bad for you. I try and avoid them whenever possible. I can't resist their spell.ReplyDelete
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Too much Gluttony so not enough Lust!ReplyDelete
You very artfully packed all the sins into one short poem. Nicely done. Always appreciate economy with wordsReplyDelete
Luke @ WordSalad
loved loved loved this one...and I think I may have had a few of those voodo dohnuts b4...,lolReplyDelete
Ah, Kathy---yummy sins!ReplyDelete
Ah yes, as they 'say just look for the glowing "Crueller Chandelier of Life" blazing through the windows.' Love those voodoo dolls. Danger Will Robinson.ReplyDelete
This is so thoughtful,ReplyDelete
ooze, the word makes me smile...
vivid demonstrations, enjoy your playfulness so very much!
great take on the theme :)ReplyDelete
I love voodoo donuts ;)
What a great poem! I love the voodoo donuts!ReplyDelete
Mine are here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/18/anger/
Oh yeah..I had some voodoo ice cream trying to get me to sin todayReplyDelete
I liked this one!
Wonderful take on the theme my friend...just loved the read!!! Hugs xReplyDelete
Never saw a voodoo donut before..I'd be hooked in a NY minute!! much fun..loved it!ReplyDelete
CURSE YOU VOODOO DONUTS! I have never actually had them but know quite a few who have. Great encapsulation of the seven deadly sins!ReplyDelete
love a fun take on the theme and the voodoo donuts...I want a chocolate one....I AM hungry...bkmReplyDelete
Oh -- so true. Those damned sinful donuts.ReplyDelete
You nailed this one down perfectly, a tight write and well crafted in a few words, very descriptive,
I haven't had any of those Voodoo donuts in a long while,but they are now selling them here in the SE end of town.