"We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing." ~George Bernard Shaw

"Look at everything as though you were seeing it either for the first or last time." ~Betty Smith, A Tree Grows in Brooklyn

Tuesday, October 05, 2010

Four Elements of LIfe

Inhaling roses

watery wet scents

that tease my nose

fierce fires

ignite my heart

and pierce the earth


Jingle said...

my goodness,
you are so dear...

what a perfect poem for the theme...
cool treat.

Crystal Mary said...

Oh so good...very original and sweet. Thanky uo for stopping by, my place...Ta and God Bless you. CML

JamieDedes said...

Simply beautiful. And you posted to theme. Well done and welcome to potluck.

Enjoy your visitors and your visiting.

One of mine is here:

Poem on ...

JamieDedes said...

Suggest you may want to open this up so that people who don't have a Google account can post a comment.

I had to use an account that has nothing to do with my poetry blog. Also have noticed that more than half of our community are on wordpress.

Just a suggestion.

Bing (PinkLady) said...

this is truly lovely! welcome to potluck. :)

Stafford Ray said...

Ha ha!... Watery wet scents indeed and you did use all the elements.

Jingle said...

Happy Birthday on Saturday...

Shashi said...

very well done..

ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

Harshika said...

lovely :)

to the point and crisp. i can never write like this