Black crows fall
Into fir trees cawing
Flight fighting
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Broken wings and feathers galore. Great image of wicked crows.
ReplyDeletenice...its a rubble in the sky, raining us in feathers...
ReplyDeleteImages of fighting crows totally fits the depressing mood created by the figure eight painting, Kathe. The broken wings are so obviously visible. Love your haiku. Thanks for sharing. =D
ReplyDeleteNow we know why the game "Angry Birds" is so popular. :-)
ReplyDeleteFlight fighting? interesting!
ReplyDeletethanks-
So clearly seen...chaos in a few words!
ReplyDeleteI can see that now!
ReplyDeleteDear Kathe: Powerful Haiku; magical; mystical...can hear the caws of these two crows~!!! Magnificent~!!!
ReplyDeleteSquabbling crows? I see ...
ReplyDeleteHaw - yes! Many a good air fight with crows have I witnessed! Need to stop throwing out so much of my baking failures, I guess!
ReplyDeletePesky crows...
ReplyDeleteNow you've pointed them out I can see them too. And hear them cawing!
ReplyDeleteNever would I have seen them! And now I do.
ReplyDeleteGreat take!
GdayvKathe, like the falling birds in " melancholia" , cheerio
ReplyDeleteI'm picturing you sitting outdoors, wine glass in hand, early evening ... bird watching.
ReplyDeleteWhat to do with the crows!!!
ReplyDeleteThat's crows for you!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
That happens all the time around my house. Nice one!
ReplyDeleteThanks for checking up on me. I've been working on a longer writing project...and some other projects...and enjoying the kids' summer vacation...and being lazy...
I hope you're having a good summer, too!
Love this, Kathe. Absolutely nothing came to me when I saw this prompt, and having read a few I must say it didn't seem to generate the most creative work. But you got it right! (I see you have a new Mag up there at the top of your page but I haven't downloaded the pic yet and won't read any yet...)
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