I am using both Magpie Tales and BifocalUnivision's
images and putting them together here:
Plus these two poems work perfectly for
this weeks Jingle Poetry Potluck
Evolution, Environment and Survival!!
No illusions floating
In radioactive fusion
Dangerous drops of water
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Ode to Yellow #6
there's cheetos and fritos
korn kurls and cheezits
krispy chips and corn nuts
but nuttin' like cheez puffs whew!
that's a whole lotta stuff
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for more Jingle Poetry Potluck go here:
for more Magpie Tales go here: http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
or for BifocalUnivision go here: http://bifocalunivision.blogspot.com/
(Oh no! I've been cross-memed! LOL!)
ReplyDeleteSimply delicious, Kathe! :)
I am not sure there is actually better living with chemistry. I suppose there is if all goes according to plan. Great Haiku and the cheesy stuff, I love it but it doesn't love me. I am sans one gallbladder and I just can't handle it.
ReplyDeleteA powerful message in the first one.
ReplyDeleteTimely, topical -- good.
ReplyDeleteReally grateful for that "whole lot of stuff"...all well done!
ReplyDeleteThat's quite a visual, the one thing we can't live without, water. Brrr!
ReplyDeleteExcellent - the first is timely and more than a touch scary and the second is just plain tasty. :)
ReplyDeletedangerous water drops indeed - good poems
ReplyDeletelovely. both of them :)
ReplyDeletePowerful and timely message in your first piece.
ReplyDeleteAnything to do with cheese makes me poetic!
ReplyDeleteTimely, superb work. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteYellow is the colour of old fat! Haha!
ReplyDeleteLove this Kathe....but now I am hungry! :-)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant first and yummy second!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Those snacks look more radioactive than your rain!
ReplyDeleteVery neat poems . . but to UK eyes, that orange stuff is a ghastly colo(u)r!
ReplyDeletethere is something so tragic when a natural resourse like water, is something that causes fear.
ReplyDeletesmart one...
ReplyDeletewell done.
ode to yellow was awesome.
ReplyDeleteStellar! Both pieces.
ReplyDeleteGood Magpie Kathe ... bkm
ReplyDeleteFrightening when one stops to think about it. Excellent reality check.
ReplyDeleteLike both these poems. The cheesy one made me hungry. Clever haiku too!
ReplyDeletehttp://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/04/11/evolution-in-a-nutshell/
wow..
ReplyDeletesimply and direct.
eloquent writing...
A++
wow! mines here~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/18/natures-gravity/
ReplyDeleteawesome write!
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