"We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing." ~George Bernard Shaw

"Look at everything as though you were seeing it either for the first or last time." ~Betty Smith, A Tree Grows in Brooklyn


Sunday, March 06, 2016

Magpie Tales #308 Forgiveness

Atonement letter
Photo provided by Tess Kincaid of Magpie Tales
 
Lips imprint
Enclosed pleas of love's remorse
Forgive me
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21 comments:

Sandee said...

Very well done. I've done that a time or two myself.

Have a fabulous day Kathe. Big hug to you and tons of scritches to Miss Lucy. ♥♥♥

Rajesh said...

That is nice.

Other Mary said...

Fits the picture perfectly. Very good!

brudberg said...

So much hope in that kiss..

Stephen Hayes said...

Very thought provoking.

Cat-tails: here be wagging tales said...

If only he would. :(

Katherine said...

A hope, a wish I hope she saw fulfilled. Lovely!

Sandra said...

sweet!

rhymeswithbug.com said...

remorse,sadness,anshope all wrapped up together

messymimi said...

Ah, the hope that accompanies such a missive! Very well done.

Donetta Sifford said...

Powerful words!

Sara McNulty said...

Perfect poem for the photo.

Kutamun said...

How could you leave me ?

DeeDee said...

Crisp and beautiful

Helen Killeen Bauch McHargue said...

Sweet and sad.

Karen S. said...

Let's hope he does!

Tess Kincaid said...

Bittersweet...

Susan Anderson said...

That works very well for this prompt. Excellent!

=)

wojisme said...

Short and painful! I love the pointed brevity. It hits the mark!
Walt

Truedessa said...

perfect compliment to the image.

Rajlakshmi said...

beautiful and touching write.