Two empty hands
Palms up lacking promise
Lacking care
~~~~~~~~~~
OR
Warm soft gloves
Keep lovers hands cozy while
Clasping mine
~~~~~~~~
OR
Two lost gloves
One right - one left make a pair
When desperate
~~~~~~~~~~~
OR
Left behind
and on the other hand
you're right
~~~~~~~
Happy New Year !
31 comments:
All very good! Nice Haiku Magpie.
Lovely choices!
We're all quick off the mark this week - have we been waiting for Willows return?
Hope you had a great Christmas
Terrific stuff here--haiku
times four, a quadku,
or haikuad. Great way to
blossom into several
directions and alternatives.
/two empty hands/ always
meant honesty, acceptance
to native Americans, open
hands, open heart, arms
open; yet gloves mantle,
they cover up and deny
the touch so often needed.
I like the oracle of the
two lost gloves coming
together somewhere in
the universe, and creating
oneness, a pair.
Lovely haiku.... fun pieces.
Those are great!
The last one makes me smile. Good job on all.
Dear Kathe,
My favorite?
Warm soft gloves
Keep lovers hands cozy while
Clasping mine
Happy New Year!
Lovely pieces and happy 2011 to you too.
Would you consider creating 9 more, and then you could call it
"13 Ways of Looking at a Magpie"? (Just kidding!)
I really enjoyed having the variety of poems to read. Thanks.
Great haikus, kathew! You have a nice flow to it. Very good!
Nice! I think I like the first one best, maybe because it made my Native American DNA tingle? ;^)
Very good. I offer the sound of one finger snapping.
High marks for your haikus!!!!
Love, love the last one..all good and clever, though!
Well done!
Oh very good, each and every one of them.
Kathew,
Like a steel trap; Your mind that is.
rel
Love them all. Happy New Year :)
Loved the second and third haiku very much
Full of good ideas.
Great way to start the new year..with three choices....have a good one Kathe....bkm
Oh, snap. That third one is awesome.
4 very good haiku and I cannot do one enjoyed them all
Dear Kathe: Definitely love Haiku #2...sounds positive and sweet!
"Clasping mine"
Mmmm...lovely!!!
Although, I do love all of them, however, but I think you scored a home run with Number 2!!!Happy New Year 2011!!!
Nice group of haikus, the third is especially excellent. Thanks for all your visits and comments,kathew, and Happy New Year.
I loved that last one--full of humor! That was great! LOL
I admire people who, like yourself, can write poetry like this. You make it seem effortless.
Have a wonderful New Year--and thank you for stopping by!
This was fun and my favorite was definitely this one (your humor cracks me up!):
Two lost gloves
One right - one left make a pair
When desperate
beautiful haiku
but that last sky shot?
breathtaking
Happy MMXI
you have such mindful imaginations,
well done.
keep wondering.
Happy 2011.
I like them all - clever. Very nice!
Wow you are amazing four haikus for the prompt....love them all Kathe! Happy New Year to you as well! :-)
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