That last stanza has me sighing!!!!So clever!
I'm the first one here!! (unless you're holding onto to other comments...and if that's the case, grrr)I wish I could write poetry like you do, but I'm stuck plodding along with story lines that contain no mystery of romance.
well. depends on what kind of moment did u spend with it :Dgood magpie!
Oh the sweet smell of memories, can seem like yesterday...Kathe this is beautiful! :-)
Lovely romantic Magpie. Ciao!
"Glistening con tigo.." Oh my. Love and Light, Sender
It always feels like only yesterday . . .
"golden hued moments" Isn't it a blessing that they nver go! Lovely.
This is lovely! It really captures that sense of memory being attached to scent.
... yesterday when I was young, the taste of life was sweet as rain upon my tongue .... Your Magpie reminds us all!
"Glistening con tigo! I don't know what it means but I love it!
So romantic..one could dance to it!! Lovely...
love it..it is all of these and more....very nice..bkm
this is gorgeousI wish I could hear it and smell it :)Rene
A sweet and wonderfully 'scentual' read!
The last stanza made me giggle. great magpie and take on the picture. :) River
Scents and the memoires they evoke ...beautifully written.
I love it. And it is always just yesterday!I just followed you and for some reason darned Google didn't have my usual image, so I'm there as a silhouette. I may delete and try again.
Wonderfully written work! Linking the cologne to memories of love. =)-Weasel
I vote for just yesterday.Love the romantic nature of this, the longing questions, the memories.BEAUTIFUL!(And thank you for the comment on my magpie, so appreciated.)
This has a light, whimsical feel that I really like.
This is very, very well-done.
just one sniff and its easy to remember...nice write...great magpie!
Love the air of romance... with a little tit for tat. pulled me right in. Great mag!
a familiar scent can flood someone with such memories :) Great poem :)
Love your approach to this!
Dear Kathew: Very sensitive portrait of the sensual kind; This line is so romantic!"love scented fragments Of golden hued moments". Thank-you!
Aromatically beautiful. Nice magpie.
Love the way it flows. Nice Magpie!
Once again, wonderful mag Kathew... Loved the way you structured it and wondered what it really was... I can go with any of them or all of them.. Terific Mag..
I love the languages...and the options! Nice.
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