A watering can is so easy to useJust fill it
And spill it
And your plants will grow
So simple and I'm so easily amused
Filling it
Spilling it
Watching the water flow
Around the roots the water oozes
I filled it
And spilled it
Voila! It's a garden show
39 comments:
You give such life to this little old can. I can imagine this a poem for a child. Very nice.
Hi Cathe, a watering can is so low tech like your lovely bright and simple celebration of spashing water about. Made me feel good.
lovely. Lots of flow here.
oh my this one was fun
I could see it all
well done
"Fill it and spill it"
Well said!
cute repetitions...
lovely magpie!
I think I spot a green thumb here! :)
Love: Voila! It's a garden show!
A fun flow to this one.
Isn't it a joy to use?
Pretty little poem to go with your pretty flowers I am sure.
Christine
A very lively poem. I enjoyed it :)
Great flow and rhyme. Truly delightful!
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clever transition with 'fill' and 'spill.' i think that really held the poem together really well, keeping the stanzas flowing. great job playing around with the words.
Nice and upbeat! I'll be humming this today...fill it and spill it, fill it and spill it, filling it, spilling it, just look at the garden grow!
Lovely poem. :-)
The poem has a wonderful, and you give so much life to the old watering can. Great magpie!
-Weasel
Your watering can flows with water all over just like the beauty of your words! :-)
What lovely cadence and lilt!
This is so fun!
Delightful little read!
This was good!
have fun!
Absolutely wonderful. Such a happy magpie!
this has a really fun feel to it...and wonder...beautiful magpie!
The simple act of encouraging growth. Great feel-good factor in this one.
Enjoy the rhythmic nature of the poem.
Neat poem from very simple idea!
Very neat poem from a nice, simple idea.
This has a wonderful lilt..you do have a way with words!
Love that fill and spill!
Conjugation of two verbs:
FILL AND SPILL
FILLING AND SPILLING
FILLED AND SPILLED
STAR of the Garden Show:
THE WATERING CAN!!!!!!!
LOVED it!
Thank you for visiting.
Steve
When my son was turning four, the birthday present he desired was a watering can. I guess this is why!
"T"'s remarks to me reminded me of when my boys were little how I used to keep them entertained on a hot summer day. I would give each of them a bucket of water and a clean paintbrush and they would then go around the outside of the house "painting" it with water! They had great fun and it usually ended up with all of us having a water fight-great way to cool off!
Thanks everyone for your kind comments!
Clever and catchy...I like the use of repetition.
I love it. You did a great job. Fill it and spill it. From now on when I water my flowers I am going to tell HH (Handsome Husband) I am going to fill it and spill it. LOL. Thanks for stopping by.
QMM
Dear Kathew: Really, really love this fun poem! Like an old children's rhyme; bright eyed and bushy tailed! Love it!And I think I can remember this "Fill it; Spill it!". Excellent!
Kathew,
Simple, yet complex... give a little get a lot.
rel
Such a sweet little rhyme - I loved it!
I really like this -- clever repetition.
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