"We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing." ~George Bernard Shaw
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Thursday, July 15, 2010

Magpie #23


this was inspired by Willow's blog Magpie Tales

go visit for more creative poes, stories etc!






Ouch-it's hot!

Love so fiercely on fire hot
my soul steams


Plus an addendum to above posting

as some people said this should have been

about the extinguisher NOT the fire...chuckle-

so being an obedient good sport-here it is:



Don't blow on it!

The fire's outta control!

Extinguish it!



The firemen had to bash in the front door to get to the fire!

27 comments:

willow said...

Steamy!! (my whole body is steamy this week)

Carrie Burtt said...

Love your snappy repartee! This piece is the love we all want to have! Great work! :-)

signed...bkm said...

Wow...I can feel the burn....bkm

Helen said...

... and your Magpie is hot too!

Marilyn said...

Wow, too hot to touch.

Stafford Ray said...

You were supposed to write about the extinguisher, not the fire!!!! Evacuate the neighborhood!

Brigid said...

Lovely magpie, short, sweet and soulful.

Brigid said...

Lovely piece, short and sweet and soulful.

Marilyn said...

Love can be hot stuff! I like this.

annell said...

You're right it's all soooooo hot!

ninotaziz said...

Too hot!

Friko said...

I'd be happy with either! seeing that you produced both, I am even happier!

brenda w said...

I absolutely screamingly love, "so fiercely on fire hot my soul steams" know what you mean! LOL

JeffScape said...

Extinguish the fiercely on fire hot love? Or is that a different outta control fire? Heheh.

christine said...

Ha ha Loved the comment about not the fire but the extinguisher!!
Christine

steveroni said...

OK, I guess it's up to me to DO this:

Don't blow on it!
The fire's outta control!
Extinguish it!

OMG! You are "serious", Peep...

Wonderful!

Smiles!

Catalyst said...

Tasty!

kathew said...

Thanks everbody for your great remarks! Isn't Magpie Tales the best?? Happy weekend!

RA said...

Steamy, short and to the point! In short: a very snappy repartee!

chiccoreal said...

Dear KathW: This is INTENSE...HOT! Love it! Excellent! Ahhhh....

Tumblewords: said...

I don't think one extinguisher will be enough for this hot piece! :)

steviewren said...

Hot and steamy...a condition I am very familiar with living in Alabama. But, I'm always ready for a hot steamy love.

Brian Miller said...

wow. smoking magpie...and that they had to bash the door in. ha.

Sue J said...

Great Magpie/s.

Angie Muresan said...

Oh! Love is hot!

rel said...

difficult to extinguish the fire of lust. ;)
Oh well, why try?
rel

Queenmothermamaw said...

It is a pretty hot topic, for sure. Great job.
QMM