this was inspired by Willow's blog Magpie Talesgo visit for more creative poes, stories etc!
Ouch-it's hot!
Love so fiercely on fire hot
my soul steams
my soul steams
Plus an addendum to above posting
as some people said this should have been
about the extinguisher NOT the fire...chuckle-
so being an obedient good sport-here it is:
Don't blow on it!
The fire's outta control!
Extinguish it!
The firemen had to bash in the front door to get to the fire!
27 comments:
Steamy!! (my whole body is steamy this week)
Love your snappy repartee! This piece is the love we all want to have! Great work! :-)
Wow...I can feel the burn....bkm
... and your Magpie is hot too!
Wow, too hot to touch.
You were supposed to write about the extinguisher, not the fire!!!! Evacuate the neighborhood!
Lovely magpie, short, sweet and soulful.
Lovely piece, short and sweet and soulful.
Love can be hot stuff! I like this.
You're right it's all soooooo hot!
Too hot!
I'd be happy with either! seeing that you produced both, I am even happier!
I absolutely screamingly love, "so fiercely on fire hot my soul steams" know what you mean! LOL
Extinguish the fiercely on fire hot love? Or is that a different outta control fire? Heheh.
Ha ha Loved the comment about not the fire but the extinguisher!!
Christine
OK, I guess it's up to me to DO this:
Don't blow on it!
The fire's outta control!
Extinguish it!
OMG! You are "serious", Peep...
Wonderful!
Smiles!
Tasty!
Thanks everbody for your great remarks! Isn't Magpie Tales the best?? Happy weekend!
Steamy, short and to the point! In short: a very snappy repartee!
Dear KathW: This is INTENSE...HOT! Love it! Excellent! Ahhhh....
I don't think one extinguisher will be enough for this hot piece! :)
Hot and steamy...a condition I am very familiar with living in Alabama. But, I'm always ready for a hot steamy love.
wow. smoking magpie...and that they had to bash the door in. ha.
Great Magpie/s.
Oh! Love is hot!
difficult to extinguish the fire of lust. ;)
Oh well, why try?
rel
It is a pretty hot topic, for sure. Great job.
QMM
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